After receiving feedback from both teachers and the students in our class, our first draft was described as 'Beautiful but nothing else' meaning that it all looked good but didn't really inform the audience of the storyline and show whats going on. We understood that's the narrative was weak and took the feedback as a positive thought.
The street scene, which is going to be used as flashback of Chanan on his 'hustle', hassling pedestrians to listen and purchase his demo disk, was filmed on Wednesday.After being edited and applied to the video this would obviously make the narrative stronger and give an overall clearer understanding.
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